Really fun read. I liked the low-downess of it (for lack of better words). The urge to fart, taking a piss etc. The streams of consciousness you capture are so enjoyable. Very easy to imagine the scene, the smell, the temperature and the staleness in the air. I’m always impressed
I even found enjoyment in the assortment of words: blazer, cigarette butts, cassettes, scorpions, fold down radios. Sometimes small things like that scratch an it’s I didn’t know was there lol I’m here for it
Imagine that, I never knew I needed a lesson from Larrick. It takes a very descriptive story to pull me in. And you did that. I feel I was on that journey with 'ol Larrick. However, I did piss on the scorpion.
Really fun read. I liked the low-downess of it (for lack of better words). The urge to fart, taking a piss etc. The streams of consciousness you capture are so enjoyable. Very easy to imagine the scene, the smell, the temperature and the staleness in the air. I’m always impressed
Thanks, Jon! You’ve picked out the feelings I meant to convey.
I even found enjoyment in the assortment of words: blazer, cigarette butts, cassettes, scorpions, fold down radios. Sometimes small things like that scratch an it’s I didn’t know was there lol I’m here for it
Imagine that, I never knew I needed a lesson from Larrick. It takes a very descriptive story to pull me in. And you did that. I feel I was on that journey with 'ol Larrick. However, I did piss on the scorpion.
That's a good story, Dave. I enjoyed it.
What made you choose Larrick as a name?
No reason at all. I just liked the sound of it. It sounded Western, masculine, and otherwise open to interpretation.